One Piece RP - Race to the New World
Would you like to react to this message? Create an account in a few clicks or log in to continue.


The best One Piece RP you will ever find
 
HomeLatest imagesSearchRegisterLog in

 

 Da Brick Wall

Go down 
3 posters
AuthorMessage
that guy---> lol




Posts : 10
Join date : 2011-03-29

Da Brick Wall Empty
PostSubject: Da Brick Wall   Da Brick Wall EmptyTue Mar 29, 2011 10:33 am

Name:Jeffry Alden (Da Brick Wall)

Age:32

Bounty:250

Species:Giant

Occupation: Defense!

Allegiance:

Home Village/Ocean: west

Appearance: really big lenght and width scary looking bald wth a tatto on the back of his head with a Red "X" on it looks some what muscular broad shoulders wears a Black fedora with a white trim and a trench coat with a white trime and under that is a shirt and suspenders and brown hikeing boots with a couple extra inches of metal on the end of them makeing the boots seem larger hes twice the size of a average human and hes a middle age looking man

History: as a young boy jeffry and his family always had some kind of money they were rich people but when there bussnise crashed into the ground they went bankrupt and jeffry couldint get used to being like that so when he was 16 he went off looking for riches and glory. One day on the boat he fell off during a storm and he nearly was killed but when he was in the water he bashed a hole in the bottom of the ship useing his fist and lifted himself inside and him and the ship barely made it to th north island where him and his crew stayed for 3 years and eventualy jeffery had eoungh money to buy his own ship.

Personality: most times gambler evil greedy persuasive dose anything to get what he wants mean rude takes the best oprotunity hates: therats getting hurt fun: pushing people into the water by the docks cometting crimes robbery ect fears: some what scared of water likes: people that will join him people fearing him people he can persusae
or manpulate gambling
Ship: U.S.S RICHES

Ship Flag: a giant "X"

Devil Fruit:
type:
effect:

Special Abilities: Adrline Rush "feels very little pain for a coupe minutes" very strong

Learned Techniques (Keep it 1-25): powerful fist (hits alot harder for a while makes him tired when uses it) fists of furry (throws lighter punches that arent as powerful but really fast) Disarmer (if possible can sometimes disarm enemy rare use on other players dosent always work"

Weapons/Items:bare hands

Goals: Get Rich once agin




Last edited by that guy---> lol on Wed Mar 30, 2011 3:58 am; edited 9 times in total
Back to top Go down
Cobdogred

Cobdogred


Posts : 31
Join date : 2011-03-12
Age : 33
Location : In a galaxy far far away!

Da Brick Wall Empty
PostSubject: Re: Da Brick Wall   Da Brick Wall EmptyTue Mar 29, 2011 10:41 am

The appearance, history, and personality needs to be at least one or two paragraphs 6-12 sentences.
Back to top Go down
Gen

Gen


Posts : 84
Join date : 2011-03-28
Location : Unknown dark room with towels

Da Brick Wall Empty
PostSubject: Re: Da Brick Wall   Da Brick Wall EmptyWed Mar 30, 2011 4:04 am

Work on your spelling and punctuation

Other than that this seems okay

approved
Back to top Go down
Sponsored content





Da Brick Wall Empty
PostSubject: Re: Da Brick Wall   Da Brick Wall Empty

Back to top Go down
 
Da Brick Wall
Back to top 
Page 1 of 1

Permissions in this forum:You cannot reply to topics in this forum
One Piece RP - Race to the New World :: Character Creation-
Jump to: