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TheBlackLuffy wrote:: Name: Dorian Herron "Bare Fist Dorian"

Age:17

Bounty: 130,000

Species: Human

Occupation: Pirate/Navigator/Captain

Allegiance: Pirate

Home Village/Ocean:East Blue

Appearance: He's 6'5 feet tall. He has no chest, arm, or leg fat what so ever. Shirtless, you can see his ribs if he sucks his gut in. He has a 6 pack, and a large scar on the side of his eye. His legs are long and bony legs, with medium size calf muscles. His heck is long and slender, like the rest of his body. And his face is very bony. You can see the imprints of his skull when he is wet, or even dry some times. He has a Carmel skin completion, and dark short black hair that he keeps cut him self. He wear's a black T-shirt with a long white short sleeve coat around it that has many contraptions such as a Comps, Fighter Gloves (Not Boxing, like UFC fighter gloves), and anything else he decides to put in there. His wear's baggy denim black shorts that have 4 pockets, two front, two back. He wears a belt with a Skull belt buckle around his waist, but he tightens it just enough for it to be comfortable. His foot wear consist of black saddles that tie around his feet. And two black sweat band's that are around his ankles. Dorian is normally seen with a plain, emotionless face, due to his horrible history, he finds it hard to find something to smile about. He also wears a long black head band that he tied around his neck. The Stream is about 4 feet long and makes it down to his butt.

History: Dorian Herron is a troubled young man who was neglected as a child by his peers and his family. Dorian never knew his father, and felt that's the main reason why people didn't like him. Because he didn't have a father to teach how to be a Man. Dorian tired his best to fit in with the other kids since he was 4. But after a while, he gave up, and decided to become a loner. Dorian then began being a hooligan. By Stealing from the Market Place, which was a breeze, on account Dorian was fast for his age, and have very good balance and endurance. Beating up the local kids who teased him on a daily basis. Although it was all hard at first, the more the did it. The stronger and faster he became each day. Even though it sounds back, a criminal was making Dorian into a strong man. Dorian's Mother didn't care if he wasn't home. So Dorian rarely ever came home. Unless he needed to hide for the Marines. When Dorian turned 7, he finally moved out his mothers house, to become a criminal, and better yet, become a man. As Dorian contiuned his crimes, his publicity grew, and so did his hatred for his father. Day by Day, life was a struggle. Not the crimes themselves, but Dorian coping with the mental stress from what he heard about his father. Dorian then swore, he'd become a better man then his father. Stronger, Faster, 10x the man his father man, no 100x, no...1,000x better! One day, when Dorian was 12, and his strength had passed 6 men, and his speed could probably keep up with a cheetah, if he tried. Dorian choose to go on an all out riot against his home town, Negro Bay. Dorian started by destroying homes, mainly small houses with one punch, Some people grew in fear of Dorian's Inhuman strength. Although some thought "HE'S JUST A KID! WE SHOULD HANG HIM AND GET IT OVER WITH!!" Soon, a angry mob of villagers were after Dorian, but Dorian didn't run. Instead, he found them. He told them "...You wanna fight....then come on..." Dorian stood in front of the 100 of angry grown men, waiting for their next move. Then, a medium size man with a pitch fork rushed towards Dorian. Dorian's eye's narrowed, and his pupils turned black as a midnight with no moon. He easily evaded each lunge that the man threw towards him with his pitch fork. Finally, Dorian kicked the pitch fork into the air with one foot, raising his foot straight into the air. Thus, bringing his foot down on the man's head, knocking his head into the ground, and crushing his face completely. At that moment, the rest of the mob grew in fear of Dorian. But just as another man jumped out the crowed. Dorian quickly turned his attention to the man. Dorian then kicked the falling Pitch fork right into the mans chest, just before the pitch for hit the ground. At that, more and more men began attacking Dorian. Until only one was standing. His name was Leon Lexus. Leon and his crew had stopped on this Island to refill his ship on food. Until he heard of a problem of a violent riot breaking out. Dorian glared at Leon, he knew nothing of Pirates during the time. Leon told Dorian he has quiet some skill, but his Anger is going to be the end of him. Enraged, Dorian rushed towards Leon in a blind rage. Dorian then brought his fist back and prepared to do his signature move. "Bare....FIST!!!"
Dorian quickly threw a bullet fast punch at Leon. Leon stood there unharmed, as he caught Dorian's fist, just before it hit his face, WITH HIS TONGUE! Leon pushed Dorian back 10 feet with a lunge of his head. Sending Dorian flying back. Dorian then stopped him self and landed on the ground. He looked up to see were Leon was, but he was gone. Leon then appeared behind Dorian and grabbed Dorian's arm and pulled it behind his back, he then slammed Dorian to the ground and restricted any movement. whispered in his ear "Do you want to learn how to fight?" Dorian, stopped, he was paralyzed in pure terror. Dorian then spoke up "I....I want to learn how to fi.....I WANNA LEARN HOW TO FIGHT! I WANT TO BE A MAN!!!!!!!!!" Leon grinned and then disappeared again. He had left to tell his crew that their going to make this Town their main HQ. Before they started training, Leon Gave Dorian a Devil fruit, to make sure he wouldn't get hurt while sparing with Leon, He gave him the Gomu Gomu No Mi. For the next 10 years, Leon trained Dorian in the arts of Kung Fu, Karate, and Kick Boxing. Leon's Navigator, Polimar, Taught Dorian how to Navigate. After Dorian hit 17. He decided to set sail, and become a Pirate, just like Leon. But not for any intentions of gaining fame, and fortune. But to Become a Strong man!

Dorian currently took part in a war that involved the hostile take over of the island Ashople. The Marines felt the need to take control of this Island. Dorian, unknowingly, was on the Island at the same time as his past master, Leon Lexus. When Dorian stalked Leon to the Mansion were other pirate captains were meeting to discuss the matters. He volunteer him self to help fight. Dorian was just leaving the Mansion, although the battle had already started, just to see one of the Navy's strongest Admirals standing face to face in front of him, Major Payne. Although Dorian was defeated, Major Payne vowed he'd kill him one day. Even though those were his intentions..Dorian was saved by Leon. After the War, Dorian begged Leon to teach train him to become even STRONGER then he already was. He wanted to be able to defeat Payne. Leon accepted. For 6 months, Leon trained on a large Island a bit farther off then Ashople. Dorian learned new techniques, and his strength was increased ten folds.

Current Events:

Dorian has just set sail with a new goal in his heart. To form a powerful pirate crew, and have a rematch with Major Payne. Dorian has made his way to a small Island called Mineto.

Personality: Dorian is a very clam young man. He expresses him self through words, and proves points by logic. He is very wise and doesn't like stupid things, or people. When annoyed, he tries his best to calm him self down, Or get away from the situation. When it comes time to fight. He uses Kung Fu: Self Defense style, to prevent any unneeded blood shed. On account he is saving his skill for his Father, who's location is still unknown.

Ship: A Small Raft, He calls it "Black Floater"

Ship Flag: No Flag

Devil Fruit: Gomu Gomu No Mi
type: Paramecian
effect: turns the user's body into rubber

Special Abilities:Immense Super Human Strength, Super Human Endurance, Super Human Speed, Busōshoku Haki, Haōshoku, Kenbunshoku Haki, 2nd Gear, 3rd Gear

Learned Techniques (Keep it 1-25):

Bare Fist: Dorian's main and very first signature move. First seen used against the ever so powerful Leon Lexus. Its a basic punch. Now Enhanced by the Gomu Gomu No Mi, which can make it a long range attack.

Bare Bulldozer: Dorian will cross his arms and rush right through a crowd of enemies. This move can also be used to knock down Doors. This move is Enhanced by the Gomu Gomu No Mi, which makes what ever recoil damage he would take from ramming into a wall to nearly 0.

Bare Barrage: Dorian will begin to punch rapidly and randomly in one direction. This move is Enhanced by the Gomu Gomu no Mi to make it look like Thousands of fist flying towards you, hence a barrage.

Bare Drop Kick: Dorian will front flip, bringing his heel down, and slamming in it collision with his enemies head. Normally slamming the enemies head into the ground. This move was first seen against a man who was apart of an angry mod trying to kill Dorian.

Bare Palm: Dorian will open his hand and quickly push it against his enemy. Sending them flying backwards a good 3-5 feet. This move is used to make space between Dorian and his enemy. It is also used to avoid damage from on coming attacks if he is on the floor, it can be used to quickly get back on his feet.

Bare Knock Out: Dorian will muster up all the strength he has and delivers one uppercut to his enemy, then a strong right hook, attempting to knock them out. Mainly works on weaker enemies who piss him off.

Bare Human Arrow:Grabbing onto A Pole or any sturdy round pole like object. Dorian will then begin to swing his body around the pole. Causing his arm to wrap around it. When he is fully wrapped around the pole. He will let gravity take its course, and begin to spin around the pole, unraveling. Dorian will let his body be flung towards his target at an extremely high speed. Dorian will hold the palms of his feet together and held both his arms backwards. Looking like a human arrow!

1000 Spear Barrage: This move is exactly the same as Bare Barrage. Except his hands are not fist, they are spears. (Like if you were going to karate chop some one.) This move is so far Dorian's only new move that Leon has taught him that doesn't involve emotions.

Bare Frisbe: Dorian will take hold of any object that is flat and blunt. He will then stretch is arm out about 10-15 feet away from his body. The shorter the range, the more damage the attack will do. Dorian will then begin to spin around on one foot at a rapid pace, building momentum. He will then let go of the object he took hold of and send it flying towards his opponent. Like a Frisbe.

God's Bare Fist: Currently Dorian's strongest Move. Dorian will muster up every ounce of strength he has in his body. Thus, he will do a Bare Fist, but shout the word God in front of it to emphasize of powerful the punch is. This move is normally used to take down Giants or very strong Enemies.

Bare Fist Helicopter: Dorian starts off by grabbing hold of the persons shoulders or arms or even neck. Dorian will then pull him self over head and high into the sky. Dorian then began to spin his body around, causing his stretched out arms to twist and twist and twist. After a few more spins, Dorian then let his arms unwind. But from the bottom half. Dorian's opponent will then then began to spin with Dorian's arms unwinding. Dorian then lets his opponent spin round and round, so fast it looked like he/she was a twister! He will then let go of his opponent and let them go spinning into a random direction.

Focus:This move is used to avoid then counter attacks. Dorian will take a deep karate breath. Calming him self. Thus, he will take his chosen stance. Once he is stance is complete, He will stay completely still and wait for his opponent to attack. If his opponent attacks with in 3 feet near him. He will focus on were the pressure is coming from, allowing him to block and or counter the attack with a Throw or a counter attack. This is a move Leon learned from Neol. This move was created BY Neol.

Rage:This move is more basic, and not so much as a move. More of a state. Dorian's Rage will build up to a point were he can feel his blood boil. (THIS IS NOT 2ND GEAR OR ANY WERE NEAR IT!). As his temper builds, His eye's will widen and his pupils will dilate. He will then attack what ever or what ever pissed him off with full force. Not being able to hold back at all. Although he is going on all in this stage. He is also unable to stop attacking the target until it is K.O'd or killed. Basically a Berserk form. In this form. Dorian's accuracy dulls down to less then a normal human. Making this a very easy state to avoid, but deadly if you get caught or hit by one of his attacks.

Weapons/Items: Fighting Gloves

Goals:To become a strong man.

Posts : 164 Join date : 2011-03-12 Location : home

why did you repost it?

Posts : 70 Join date : 2011-04-04 Location : Stalker?

accident..any away..

Added Haki, 2nd Gear, and 3rd Gear.

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kk REAPPROVED